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I don't know how to write
a love poem.
What the hell
is wrong with me?

Despair and anger
flow so easily from my mind.
So why can't love
do the same?

I don't understand
why it's so hard,
to say "I love you"
when I know I do.

Why can't I say that,
I want you in my arms
or that
I can't stop thinking about you?

You are so funny,
you are so cool.
Why can't I say these things
to you?

I want to know how you do it.
How do you pour love
onto paper
so easily?

How do you say,
I want you here all the time
with me,
in a witty rhyme?

I don't know how to write
a love poem.
So this will have to do:
I love you too.
©2007-2009 ~thephantom357
:iconthephantom357:

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EDIT: Okay i updated this just to show everyone how much i've changed. I mean, look at my gallery now, the majority of the poems i write are about love, lolz. :D
I think i've come a long way since this poem...but i still like it :)


lolz yeah....this is for you, skygray! My horrible (and humorous) attempt at a love poem :D

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:iconskygray:
Here's how. Add caffiene and a hard dose of heavy rock and walah! love poem! jk. Ohhhh, I wuv it! It's so good! yay! thank you so much! And i love you, too. thx! I wuv you!

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Hello. Hello. Hello. Hello? Crap why do people hang up.
:iconthephantom357:
ooooh so thats how its done! :D yay! i'm glad you like it! i luv you too!
:iconthephantom357:
this is an OLD poem! no worries dear, if that's what your thinking...lookie at the date posted:May 26, 2007
it feels like forever ago...crazy huh?
:iconrandomcutie:
I remember reading that... didn't have an account then... I think you showed it to me... anyway, still good. You have come a long way, though.

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People change so that you can learn to let go, things go wrong so that you can appriciate them when they're right, and sometimes good things fall apart so better things can fall together.
:iconthephantom357:
thanks :) it feels like so long ago...
:icongizzygirl:
That poem was really cute, and they're getting better and better! :D

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I looooooe yoooooou... on a stick! :analprobe: on a glowy stick! :XD:
:iconthephantom357:
yay! i'm glad to hear it :)

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